June 19, 2022


  • Small mix tweak on “Dream City”
  • I think we got it

Hatchford Hotel

  • I didn’t think there was any other sizeable rewrites. I was wrong.
  • I took Nate V’s advice on economy of locations to heart and jotted down notes on how we could remove all of the bedroom scenes by moving them to the lobby.
  • Then other dominoes fell as a result and I ended up with two full pages of notes about possible tweaks.
  • Possibly remove some car scenes as well.
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