Worked on the final song (both the last song left and the finale of the play itself).
Wrote some decent verses and found ways to incorporate a few of the previous songs in a medley of sorts.
But the big news was that in writing the verse to explain the fate of one of the characters I realized that it was bad. As in, the way that character was handled was too dark; it doesn’t suit the light-hearted tone of the rest of the play.
Kate and I brainstormed a few alternatives and I’ve asked Greg to start thinking of alternate narratives for her.
So, the script still needs a rewrite. The size of which is to be determined.
He also asked me to make a recording of the loop that he has stored in there. There will be Radio Shack Frankensteining.
Coincidentally, I was invited to participate in International Drone Day a few hours before Matt came by. The kalimba could be my way into that adventure. More to come.
Watched Mr. Skywalker’s proposed video for track I remixed last month. Brilliant job. Can’t wait for him to go public with it.
HH Musical
Work continues apace on cuts.
Script topped out at 180 pages. I’m hoping to bring it down to 120. That seems insane – cutting literally 1/3 of the script but I’m most of the way there and I don’t feel that the story has been compromised.
If anything, the real story is being revealed through this process.