April 3, 2021
HH Musical
- Spent several hours combing Act II, Scenes 3, 4, and 6 into one action-packed scene.
- Reduced 32 pages to 17 pages. Though I have a few lines of dialog still to add.
- It’s not just shorter, it is better. More to-the-point and exciting which is exactly what the play needs in the home stretch.