April 3, 2021

HH Musical

  • Spent several hours combing Act II, Scenes 3, 4, and 6 into one action-packed scene.
  • Reduced 32 pages to 17 pages. Though I have a few lines of dialog still to add.
  • It’s not just shorter, it is better. More to-the-point and exciting which is exactly what the play needs in the home stretch.